Thursday, February 20, 2014

Book update

I just updated the eBook again. It'll take about 12 hours for it to process, so it's not available yet.


This time I made what I'd call significant revisions. I didn't change any theories or arguments, but I tried to tighten up the reasoning and the writing. That means that I deleted some stuff which I thought was repetitive or confusing (mostly in Amends); added some transitions; clarified some points which, on re-read I thought were unclear; and moved some passages around in order to improve the flow.


If anyone wants to discuss the book in comments under this post, they can do that without spoiler warnings. New viewers beware!